Strongest/Weakest

 I believe the strongest part of my paper is maybe the refutatio because these are common come backs to the topic, but by looking at the statistics and knowing how much pharmaceutical companies actually make each and every year you can see that this won't hinder research. However, I still believe my paper could always be better and I will keep trying to edit as I go.

I think the weakest part of my paper might be the exordium because I am not sure if I need to add more to it to be more specific and really appeal to pathos.

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